Monday, July 20, 2009

I miss you


When you were in my life

I thought we would always be together

Nothing else would be a matter

My life would be better

I was cold like a piece of ice

But always you were nice

Days passed quickly

You were lovely

I was behaving coldly

You told me you cried

During that cold night

But I said I don't mind

I was blind

One day you broke

You left me alone

But you said you love me though

Now I need you more

Please please

Come home

6 comments:

  1. Impressive.
    A request: Would you possibly write something other than love and it's troubles so that I can comment on it? I know it's necessary but try some other things. Maybe you'll become more successful.

    Good Luck

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  2. This was about love,But you commented on it
    So I think you don't have any problem with love..
    But OK I'll try
    Thanks for your comment

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  3. Why Oops????
    Did I say something wrong????
    Are you angry with me????

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  4. Not at all. I made a mistake in the above writing and I corrected it myself in the next comment. That's all.

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  5. Oh,Ok.
    So Thanks again for your nice and usefull comments.

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